In the holidays I rode Bert at taipa beach.
We took Indy and Bert for a ride down the beach. Mum lead Indy and I rode Bert. We meet some friends too. Bert wasn't too scared of the water but Indy was not scared at all.
I am a Year 7 student at Kaingaroa School in Northland, NZ. I am in Huia Whānau and my teacher is Miss Fleet.
In the holidays I rode Bert at taipa beach.
We took Indy and Bert for a ride down the beach. Mum lead Indy and I rode Bert. We meet some friends too. Bert wasn't too scared of the water but Indy was not scared at all.
I went to the movies two times during the holidays. The 1st was Fast and furious 9 and the second was space jam. I watched Fast and furious with my cousin and space jam for a friends birthday. Fast and furious 9 is my favorite.my favorite was Fast and furious 9 because off the amat of achin in the movie
Broken Wing:
Name of character: hew | ||
Our inferences | Our evidence | |
Traits | Checy | He stole the fish back from the bird |
Motives | He stole the fish back from the bird | |
Relationships | ||
What changes |
One cold winter morning at 9.00 o'clock Miss Hall entered the class. She carried a Mysterious bax as she entered the class. Miss carefully lowered the box to the rough black and grey carpet. “What is in the box“! The class asked Miss Hall as two pups lept from the box onto the rough black and grey carpet. The pups are German shepherds. As soon as the pups landed the class left their chairs to pat the pups.
The End.
Good writing Dylan: You have used punctuation correctly and used different sentence starters. Next time you could write more and have a problem in the story that needs resolving so that it adds more to your writing.