One cold winter morning at 9.00 o'clock Miss Hall entered the class. She carried a Mysterious bax as she entered the class. Miss carefully lowered the box to the rough black and grey carpet. “What is in the box“! The class asked Miss Hall as two pups lept from the box onto the rough black and grey carpet. The pups are German shepherds. As soon as the pups landed the class left their chairs to pat the pups.
The End.
Good writing Dylan: You have used punctuation correctly and used different sentence starters. Next time you could write more and have a problem in the story that needs resolving so that it adds more to your writing.
yes good work.can you try to organise the writing and fix it up so it's not going off the page ok.
ReplyDeleteand I don't remember Miss bringing any puppies to school, is this just your imagination?