k9 cops

 i like this book

Broken Wing

 Broken Wing:

Name of character:  hew
	Our inferences	Our evidence
Traits	Checy	He stole the fish back from the bird
Motives	He stole the fish back from the bird
Relationships
What changes

The mystery box

One cold winter morning at 9.00 o'clock Miss Hall entered the class. She carried a Mysterious bax as she entered the class. Miss carefully lowered the  box to the rough black and grey carpet. “What is in the box“! The class asked Miss Hall as two pups lept from the box onto the rough black and grey carpet. The pups are  German shepherds. As soon as the pups landed the class left their chairs to pat the pups.

The End.

Good writing Dylan: You have used punctuation correctly and used different sentence starters. Next time you could write more and have a problem in the story that needs resolving so that it adds more to your writing. 

reding

 reding was fun today.