In the holidays I rode Bert at taipa beach.
We took Indy and Bert for a ride down the beach. Mum lead Indy and I rode Bert. We meet some friends too. Bert wasn't too scared of the water but Indy was not scared at all.
I am a Year 7 student at Kaingaroa School in Northland, NZ. I am in Huia Whānau and my teacher is Miss Fleet.
In the holidays I rode Bert at taipa beach.
We took Indy and Bert for a ride down the beach. Mum lead Indy and I rode Bert. We meet some friends too. Bert wasn't too scared of the water but Indy was not scared at all.
I went to the movies two times during the holidays. The 1st was Fast and furious 9 and the second was space jam. I watched Fast and furious with my cousin and space jam for a friends birthday. Fast and furious 9 is my favorite.my favorite was Fast and furious 9 because off the amat of achin in the movie
Broken Wing:
Name of character: hew | ||
Our inferences | Our evidence | |
Traits | Checy | He stole the fish back from the bird |
Motives | He stole the fish back from the bird | |
Relationships | ||
What changes |
One cold winter morning at 9.00 o'clock Miss Hall entered the class. She carried a Mysterious bax as she entered the class. Miss carefully lowered the box to the rough black and grey carpet. “What is in the box“! The class asked Miss Hall as two pups lept from the box onto the rough black and grey carpet. The pups are German shepherds. As soon as the pups landed the class left their chairs to pat the pups.
The End.
Good writing Dylan: You have used punctuation correctly and used different sentence starters. Next time you could write more and have a problem in the story that needs resolving so that it adds more to your writing.
Wild horses
One cold rainy afternoon as the sun was setting an old man was driving his dump truck down the rough windey gravel track that was until a herd of wild horses leapt onto the track. The horses were light brown with black manes and tails with shaggy coats. The old man swerved to the outer edge of the track. The back tyres over the edge of the track and the truck rolled down the bank and the old man died. The end.
Feedback from Mrs Hall: I liked the way you used detail words like windey, rough, shaggy and swerved. I shows me you thought about what you could see as you were describing what was happening.
This term whier Donna came to teach Huia about safety on devices.
We have learnt about the Kawa of Care, Cyberbullying, and Shortcuts.
Here is my Kawa of Care Poster that I have worked on.
1. My goal for Term One is to build my confidence in class when needing support.
How I can achieve my goal:
- Putting my hand up to ask Mr Acton.
- Asking those people at my table.
- At tech I can ask Mr Russell for support.
I will know that I have achieved my goal when:
- I no longer feel anxious about asking for help.
- I can refer to the board, ask classmates or the teacher should I require help.